Okay, i didnt really know where to put this so i thought i would start a new thread, the idea is this, somewhere to put sum lyrics or rhymes up that u got goin round your head, now i ant no MC but sometimes i think of something and thought i should write it down, maybe we could have a bit of CONSTRUCTIVE critisism? anyways, ill start, no laughin at the back, this is a sorta poem about going to a club, its called Bliss....
The music travels through the air to your ears
You feel the bass pounding in your chest
Only now can you let go of all your fears
And it doesn?t matter who looks the best
The crowd of people like the waves of the sea, moving everywhere
Body?s twisting, shaking, jumping, dancing, moving everywhere
Then silence as the breakdown shatters the noise
They raise their hands and close their eyes
Looks of happiness from all the girls and boys
They look at each other and empathise
The crowd of people like the waves of the sea, moving everywhere
Body?s twisting, shaking, jumping, dancing, moving everywhere
The music starts again and the crowd roar
They all feel love towards one another
Why have they made this against the law?
Why do they keep this secret undercover?
The crowd of people like the waves of the sea, moving everywhere
Body?s twisting, shaking, jumping, dancing, moving everywhere
People dance all night until the break of dawn
When the sun rises and penetrates through blinds
And every person feels like they have been reborn
The time has come for them to rest their minds
The crowd of people as still as a calm sea, going nowhere
Body?s, tired, aching, exhausted, weary, going nowhere
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Posts: 1,415Posted 16 years ago #The thread below is sort of related...
http://www.putsonline.co.uk/forum/topic.php?id=2076&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0&sid=c550e458e26e4220cebf960ae4b54be8
Peace. -
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Posts: 1,427Posted 16 years ago #mambo7891 said: Okay, i didnt really know where to put this so i thought i would start a new thread, the idea is this, somewhere to put sum lyrics or rhymes up that u got goin round your head, now i ant no MC but sometimes i think of something and thought i should write it down, maybe we could have a bit of CONSTRUCTIVE critisism? anyways, ill start, no laughin at the back, this is a sorta poem about going to a club, its called Bliss....
The music travels through the air to your ears
You feel the bass pounding in your chest
Only now can you let go of all your fears
And it doesn?t matter who looks the best
The crowd of people like the waves of the sea, moving everywhere
Body?s twisting, shaking, jumping, dancing, moving everywhere
Then silence as the breakdown shatters the noise
They raise their hands and close their eyes
Looks of happiness from all the girls and boys
They look at each other and empathise
The crowd of people like the waves of the sea, moving everywhere
Body?s twisting, shaking, jumping, dancing, moving everywhere
The music starts again and the crowd roar
They all feel love towards one another
Why have they made this against the law?
Why do they keep this secret undercover?
The crowd of people like the waves of the sea, moving everywhere
Body?s twisting, shaking, jumping, dancing, moving everywhere
People dance all night until the break of dawn
When the sun rises and penetrates through blinds
And every person feels like they have been reborn
The time has come for them to rest their minds
The crowd of people as still as a calm sea, going nowhere
Body?s, tired, aching, exhausted, weary, going nowhere
i like this man...def doesnt suck...keep it up -
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Posts: 1,427Posted 16 years ago #mambo7891 said:
Then silence as the breakdown shatters the noise
is this a P reference ? -
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Posts: 1,659Posted 16 years ago #Sweetness61686 said:
mambo7891 said:
Then silence as the breakdown shatters the noise
is this a P reference ?
Its not dude, but when i was writing it i had the image of a PUTS gig in my mind (even though ive never been to one, lol) more a refrence to the breakdown of the song before the main chorus or beat. Heres the start of the next one: feel free to come up with a line or 2. peace:
Thes One, Double K, The People Under The Stairs,
They got lyrics, beats, bass, hi hats and snares
Thes goes crate digging, you know hes on the hunt
Off to rock another party in another continent -
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Posts: 1,427Posted 16 years ago #Double K, Double K, you know hes always rollin a blunt
....(ill try to rhyme somethin with continent
...this is why i leave the rhymin to thes and double -
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Posts: 3,255Posted 16 years ago #Used to "rhyme" like a motherf*cker, but it was with more of that pop, lyrical, melodic sensibility back when I was trying to be a singer-songwriter... that sh*t is too powder-puff for rapping though... never did blatant love music or anything... a bit of teenage angst, I guess... sorta embarrassed about that though... -
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Posts: 130Posted 16 years ago #i sit in giant lectures all day with the head phones on and doodle to the sounds of PUTS. it feels similar to writing lyrics which ive done before but aint good at. Everyone knows expressing your mind on paper whether that be lyrics or pictures feeels great. I just got back from COM318 a drew a sick tag of "Thes One" and the background is littered with my favorite thester lines fading in and out of the page.
PUTS + Blunt + 50 minute lecture = inspiration
4 me at least. -
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Posts: 1,659Posted 16 years ago #Only Human said: i sit in giant lectures all day with the head phones on and doodle to the sounds of PUTS. it feels similar to writing lyrics which ive done before but aint good at. Everyone knows expressing your mind on paper whether that be lyrics or pictures feeels great. I just got back from COM318 a drew a sick tag of "Thes One" and the background is littered with my favorite thester lines fading in and out of the page.
PUTS + Blunt + 50 minute lecture = inspiration
4 me at least.
Dont suppose ur college lets u have a blunt while in lecture does it? coz if so, im moving to the US. haha. -
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Posts: 818Posted 16 years ago #mambo7891 said:
Only Human said: i sit in giant lectures all day with the head phones on and doodle to the sounds of PUTS. it feels similar to writing lyrics which ive done before but aint good at. Everyone knows expressing your mind on paper whether that be lyrics or pictures feeels great. I just got back from COM318 a drew a sick tag of "Thes One" and the background is littered with my favorite thester lines fading in and out of the page.
PUTS + Blunt + 50 minute lecture = inspiration
4 me at least.
Dont suppose ur college lets u have a blunt while in lecture does it? coz if so, im moving to the US. haha.
ha I love being high in class:-p i do better on my tests. -
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Posts: 130Posted 16 years ago #Human. Purdue. ENGL420. haha 420. listenin to the fudgemunk, wishin i was back at my place with my buddy. we got plans to roll one up and hit the road for a little green loop. kinda cold but its a beautiful day. we bout to hip-hop, have fun and god bless.
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